I agree with most of Gimmetrow's points, i used my version of the BS article and by that i wanted to start making the changes more officient. Britain's drone crime explosion: The NY Times simply says her parents were born in Asia. The name is basic info, and I wonder if a "quiz" at teenmag is really good enough. I propose banning it from this article.
Macaulay Culkin Says He’s ‘Gonna Make Some Babies’ With Girlfriend Brenda Song
And where's the old pic????
Brenda Song picks up boyfriend Macaulay Culkin
In the link, the Brenda Song identified as president of the sorority at USC not the University of California mentioned in the previous sentencewas president and charter member in Respone to Gimmtrow's concerns i will remove the grammatical problems, some of the triviac un important qoutes. OK, that's it.